Green Chairs [afterDonald Hall]

Poetry by Julie A. Dickson, Nov 15, 2022.

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  1. Julie A. Dickson

    Julie A. Dickson Well-Known Member

    Green Chairs         [after Donald Hall]                             


    1.
    In a time when families came from farms,
    my mother was born at home, with her
    grandmother attending, standing by
    to boil water and wrap a newborn
    in soft blankets by the kitchen fire.
    Donald Hall wrote of his family farm
    in his youth; he likely did not know
    that one day his poems would incite
    The New Yorker to publish his work

    2.
    ranging over many years of verse,
    of non-fiction accounts of his life,
    poetry written by him and Jane,
    his student who loved and wrote poems,
    who tragically died before her time.
    He told and retold of his journey
    through a marriage and children, divorced -
    floundering through an alcohol haze,
    falling in love, only to lose her -

    3.
    too soon she was taken, leaving him
    alone once again, yet decades passed
    before he grieved to full extent, he
    wrote of this, reminiscing their life,
    daily routine of long walks, writing
    each morning close to Ragged Mountain
    in his family’s farmhouse with green chairs,
    set on an open porch, rocking chairs,
    the imprinted seats of ancestors .


    4.
    My father’s family farm, in a town
    near enough to my mother’s - they did
    not meet there, but nearby at the lake,
    Ontario cottages owned by
    respective family aunts, young teenaged
    neighbors canoed and swam alongside
    rocky shore, blue-green algae coated
    boulders too slippery to climb on;
    they often jumped off the public pier

    5.
    into icy-cold water, refreshed
    after chores were done: hay in the loft,
    cows milked, water toughs filled from metal
    pails; they were allowed time at the lake.
    Donald Hall wrote Ox-Cart Man, about
    survival and hard work, known by most
    farmers and families in rural
    communities, who knew no diff’rent
    other than livestock and crops growing

    6.
    to sustain their families, excess
    brought to market, goods purchased in kind
    helped to maintain their economy.
    My father’s farm grew asparagus,
    his uncle overseeing acres
    while in a garden nearby, two chairs
    and table – machined metal painted green,
    that my father kept with him after
    leaving home then repainting them white,

    7.
    and finally green again at the last.
    Hall wrote of Kurt, of Merz and baseball,
    idols like Babe Ruth and Ted Williams,
    players long dead, remembered ball games,
    pitchers and catchers propelled the sport
    from idyllic radio broadcasts
    to farm families who could not see
    players round bases, nor attend games,
    but loved baseball heroes all the same.

    8.
    Did Hall know that he would be honored,
    published and exalted, a poet
    lauded as a U.S. Laureate,
    author who loved solitude in youth,
    prep school and college, honing his craft?
    His great love lost, isolated to
    recount life in verse, storyteller
    of Eagle Pond, a family home
    where words emerged in grand scale, floated

    9.
    to the surface, alliterative
    algae on the pond, fodder to feed
    a muse, hungry to embrace the past,
    wrought with anguish and loss, as artist
    he drew us into his world, the farm
    loved by two poets stretched out before
    his readers, budding poets who write
    of simpler times, their memories and
    perhaps muse on Hall’s green farmhouse chairs.

    Poets’Touchstone 2019

    Julie A. Dickson
    *Note- I was commissioned to write a 9 stanza, 9 line, 9 syllable poem in honor of
    Donal Hall after his death by the editor of the Poets'Touchstone
     
    Last edited: Nov 16, 2022
  2. Jay Dougherty

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    I'm wondering why you have a dash between "youth" and "he" in the first stanza.
     
  3. Julie A. Dickson

    Julie A. Dickson Well-Known Member

    Thanks for pointing that out, Jay
     
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